So I liked it a lot now i understand how you won the competition. I understand all of it but the part talking about Ander [I think it's a problem with your words (but with my knowledge of the book I deduced it from what you wrote)]
" I'm the one of the prophecies. I AM Fuer Grissa OSt Drauka. I'm the true Seeker of Truth because I'm the only one who could make the blade become white. I'm Lord Rahl and I'm searching my Mother Confessor......."